内容正文:
“中国文化节”写作笔记(建议信)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友John来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目,他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节,但不知道如何将文化节办好,请你给他回信提一些建议,内容包括:
1. 文化节活动项目; 2. 学校间文化交流的意义;3. 你对他的鼓励。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题】
体裁:建议信 时态:一般现在时,将来时 话题:中国文化、活动
段落布局:信件一般分3段,第一段写来信目的,第二段写主体内容,第三段一般写寒暄语
【具体内容】
第一段:写信目的(建议信的开头)
常用句型:
1. Learning/ Knowing that you have trouble/difficulty doing..., I would like to give/offer you some suggestions.
2. I have received your letter saying that.... Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
3. You have asked me for my advice on/with regard to how to..., and I will try to make some suggestions here.
翻译:我收到你的来信,说你正在策划中国文化节。也许下面的建议对你有帮助。
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第二段:主体内容
1.中国文化节上的活动项目
“活动”要围绕“中国文化”这个主题来写,“中国文化”包括哪些内容呢?知道具体内容,写的活动才具体,才有内容。会开展“活动”的“中国文化”通常有以下几个:
1 ② ③ ④
活动的具体表现形式
邀请专业演员表演舞龙舞狮_____________________________________________________________
举办一场展览来欣赏书法作品和中国画
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给学生们一个机会去用笔蘸墨来创作他们自己的作品
give students an opportunity to dip a brush in ink/ paint to create their own works
邀请糖画艺术家来做糖人和动物
invite a sugar painting artist to make sugar animals and figures
邀请一位书法家来教学生用楷书写汉字
invite a calligrapher to teach students to write characters in regular script(楷书)
组织学生去学习如何包饺子
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用表达建议的句型写出你建议的活动表现形式,表达建议的常用句型有:
I suggest that......
My suggestion is that......
You’d better do......
It is highly recommended that......
It is advisable to do......做某事是明智/可取的
It is a good idea to do......
I think it +adj(useful/ beneficial...)+ to do...... 我认为做某事是......
用衔接语把建议串联起来,会让句子间的语义连接起来,让文章有逻辑,常用衔接语有:
first of all,to begin with(首先);what’s more, besides, in addition, moreover, additionally(此外