内容正文:
强化练(三十七) 非常规文体之调查报告与评论
选题依据:从近几年高考英语写作的新兴命题方式来看,多篇作文都需要考生形成自己的观点并加以表达,如2023年新课标 Ⅰ 卷(给外教提意见)和2021全国乙卷(Be smart online learners),调查报告和评论也是高考可能要涉及的文体。
1.调查报告——家务劳动
最近,某机构调查了2 000名中学生参与家务劳动的情况。请你根据表格内容,为你班英语园地写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.调查结果;2.你的看法。
项目
比例
每周做家务1~2小时
30%
每周做家务小于1小时
60%
不参与家务劳动
10%
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作思路]
[范文赏读]
A survey has been conducted among 2,000 high school students recently on their housework engagement. The findings are as follows.
As we can see from the chart (定语从句),most of the students(90%)do the housework,among whom 30% work for 12 hours per week and 60% for less than an hour. Meanwhile,10% of them never share housework with their parents.
The data sounds a warning to us.It's really necessary to raise children's labor consciousness and involve them in doing housework(It作形式主语,动词不定式短语是真正的主语).After all,by helping with the housework,they can develop a sense of responsibility and gain important life skills.
2.评论——音乐会
假设你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论,内容包括:
1.音乐会特点;
2.观看感受;
3.建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
[写作思路]
[范文赏读]
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.The performers from the two schools have done their best to entertain the audience with one song after another.Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality,which makes the concert almost no different from a live one(非限制性定语从句).I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to perform the violin concerto Liang Zhu(时间状语从句).They performed the concerto in a way that touched my heart(定语从句)and gave me a feeling of connection.I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for students from Chi