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Writing an ending to the story
After twenty years
Lead-in
Interview:
1.Who is your best friend in this class?
2. What will you two be like after twenty years if you and your best friend can’t see for twenty years?
The man
A criminal
Bob was arrested by a policeman because of Jimmy.
Lead-in
What do you think would happen after another twenty years?
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Read the passage and find out the answer to the question:
How did Bob feel after he got out of jail?
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The beginning
Climax
The end
Feelings
lost and helpless
surprised
doubtful
moved
astonished
Tips: Pay attention to the description of feelings.
Read the story again and find the expressions that describe:
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settings
characters
actions
Out of jail
Bob; Jimmy’s son
smiled bitterly; turned around; surprised to find;
Tips: Pay attention to the three key elements while writing the ending.
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What kind of ending is this story?
happy, sad, surprise
Do you like this ending?
Discuss & write
Work in pairs and come up with a new ending.
Answer the questions to help you.
What type of ending will it be?
Do you want to introduce other characters? If so, who are they?
Where will the ending take place?
What has happened to Bob and Jimmy over the past twenty years?
Share & evaluate
Share your group’s ending and evaluate each other’s writing.
Evaluation form
Is the theme relevant?
Does the ending include three elements of a story?
Is the logic clear?
Are the sentences smooth?
Is the writing beautiful?
Conclusion
The story is about two friends.
Respect law and be loyal to friends!
What do you learn from the lesson?
Polish your language, and pay special attention to making your story develop smoothly.
Homework
Thank you!
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Book 1 Unit 4 Friends forever
Writing an ending to the story
导 学 案
Lead-in
1. Who is your best friend in this class?
2. What will you two be like after twenty years if you and your best friend can’t see for twenty years?
What