Unit4 Writing（problems and advice）问题与建议写作课件 2023-2024学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

9A Unit 4 Problems and advice Writing Learning objectives By the end of the class, I will be able to 1.talk about teenagers’ daily problems give suggestions by using different sentence patterns correctly, 2.write a short article about giving suggestions to a teenager who has social media addition problem, 3.revise your own writing by following teachers’ instructions. 李华是一名九年级的中学生，最近，他发现自己很难放下手机，越来越沉迷于手机游戏和社交媒体，一回家就要拿起手机，到了睡觉时间也放不下，作业更是完成不了。随着中考临近，他也越来越苦恼，想改掉这个坏习惯。他在网上向知心姐姐Aunt Linda写了封求助邮件。假如你是Aunt Linda,请你就李华的问题给他回一封邮件，给他一些建议，帮助他远离手机。 要求： 1.80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.标点正确，书面整洁。 4.行文连贯，条理清楚。 问题 建议 用手机时间过长，沉迷游戏和社交媒体 认识到目前最重要的事情是学习； 让父母代为保管手机； 补充1-2点建议； 对李华的期望与寄语。 Simple present 3 paragraphs Structure? Tense(时态)? c (c) - Para.1 problems Para.2 suggestions Para.3 your hope helpful words, sentence patterns, —————————————__________________________ helpful words, sentence patterns, —————————————__________________________ helpful words, sentence patterns, —————————————__________________________ The strcuture of the article transitional words She’s an agony aunt who gives advice to people in an online newspaper or in a newspaper or magazine. What is she? Lead in 60 ’’ Hello, Aunt Linda! Hi, Amy! 60 ’’ Hi, Aunt Linda! Hello, Patrick! 60 ’’ Hello, Aunt Linda! Hello, Eric! Amy finds it difficult to____________. Patrick thinks it’s hard for him to deal with ______________________. Eric has trouble_________________ and he suffers from____________ lose weight the relationship with his parents finishing all his homework too much stress Act. 1-Listen and complete sentences. The sentence patterns to talk about problems: sb. find it difficult to... It’s hard for sb. to... sb. have trouble/difficulty/problem doing... suffer from.../ I am worried about... I feel stressed(有压力的) because... chat box What problems do you have recently? Write down your own problems in the chat box. Dear Eric, I lear