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图表作文How would you use your smart phone+
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How would you use the smart phone?
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As is demonstrated in the chart, up to 75% of the students surveyed use the smart phone to watch videos to kill time, while only 18% use it to stay in touch with people, which mobile phones are originally meant for. Besides, some students choose to play games or learn on the devices, accounting for 46% and 30% respectively.
It’s true that mobile phones can live up to growing needs, but as students, they fail to find the right balance, focusing more on entertainment than on learning and communication. Even worse, some have become so addicted, negatively influencing them academically.
Personally, it’s high time to say goodbye to mobile phones and switch your attention and efforts to school work. If you need to relax and refresh/energize yourself, access to nature and workout can be a perfect alternative. After all, learning is your core task at the moment.
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A survey on how students would use the smart phone has been conducted recently. As is illustrated in the bar chart, forty-six percent of the students use the smart phone to play online games while seventy-five percent of the students tend to watch videos with their phones. Students who choose to keep in touch with their friends by phone account for eighteen percent and in the meanwhile thirty percent of the students prefer to use their phones as learning tools.
The result of the survey reveals an unquestionable fact that students tend to use their phones more for entertainment than for communication or education. They are likely to overuse their phones or even worse get addicted to them, especially for those who use phones to play games. Fortunately, a wide range of learning apps have boosted the popularity of using phones to promote