读后续写：如何进行动作描写 导学案-2024届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写：如何进行动作描写 读后续写的写作过程中，成功的动作描写，可以交代人物的身份、地位，可以反映人物心理活动的进程，可以表现人物的性格特征。 一、精选动词，精准描述 在描写动作时，要准确抓住人物在特定情景中行动的特点，所选动作要体现人物特征，比如年龄、性格、性别、身份、环境、情景等。 Body Word bank (verb.) mouth Shout, cry , yell , scream, exclaim, whisper , murmur, mumble, mutter, sob, stammer, stutter, howl, growl, snarl/ smile, laugh , grin,  beam, smirk, giggle, chuckle/ emphasize/ stress/ tell/ add /explain /admit /reply=respond/ praise /complain/ comfort... foot rush, dash, charge, jog, trot, gallop, bolt/ make one's way to/ wander/  travel/  march/ stagger jump/ spring to one's feet/ stand still/  trip / drag/ crawl... hand/arm hit, beat, tap, pat/drag, draw, pull/ catch, grab, grasp, seize/ cast, throw/ lift, raise, carry, take/ hug, embrace/ reach(out)... 试比较： 1. We ran down to the shore in time to see an enormous animal opposite us jumping out of the water and then dropping down again. 2. We ran down to the shore in time to see an enormous animal opposite us throwing itself out of the water and then crashing down again. （B7U3 Under the Sea) 句2更能让读者感受到Old Tom的重量和动作的力量。 场景小练：Henry jumped into the river and saved Robert.      Hearing the screams, Henry ______________ to the riverside, ____________ his clothes and___________ the water without hesitation. He ________ Robert just as he was sinking the last time. By great effort, and with much danger to himself, he ________ Robert to the shore. 二、结合修饰成分让动词更具体生动 （主要为副词和介词短语） adverbs  quietly/ shyly/ slightly/ softly/ gently/ attentively/ mildly/ comfortably/ modestly/ tightly/ cheerfully/ hopefully /helplessly/ desperately/ fiercely/ violently/swiftly/firmly/ gratefully/ swiftly... in + n. in confusion/ admiration /excitement/ shock/ sorrow/ in a low/ weak/ sweet) voice... with +情感n. with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fear... with+身体部位 with its sharp eyes/ her shaky hand/her pale lips.. with+n./pron. +宾补 with his hands trembling... 牛刀小试： 1.'Will there be any food left over?' he asked        .（满怀希望地） 2.He walked