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高中英语 应用文写作高分设计
(2023 · 山东省潍坊一中高二阶段检测)昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步 理顺篇章立框架
文体解读
谋篇布局
文体说明:宣传稿的目的就是用简洁明了的语言让尽可能多的人了解某个人、某个活动、某件产品等等。要达到宣传目的,就一定要写清宣传内容,要明确其优点和特点,并要用较有力度的语言感染读者。
时态分析:宣传稿的时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
第一段:活动基本信息;
第二段:宣传事项的具体内容(过程、结果、影响、优点以及意义等);
第三段:号召加入。
第二步 拓展要点显思维
1.用原因和背景拓展要点
我很高兴昨天能参加我们学校学生的国画展览。
It was a great pleasure for me to attend an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings by our school's students yesterday.
2.用结果拓展要点
(1)这个展览几乎吸引了每个学生和老师的注意。
The exhibition has almost caught__every__student__and__teacher's__attention.
(2)这个展览激发了我对艺术的热爱。
The show inspires__my__love for art.
3.用影响和感受拓展要点
(1)他们的绘画天赋给我留下了深刻的印象。
I am__deeply__impressed__by their talents for painting.
(2)我体会到中国传统绘画的美。
I experience__the__beauty__of traditional Chinese paintings.
4.用评价和反应拓展要点
这是一个接近艺术的好机会。
It__is__a__good__opportunity to get close to art.
第三步 美化词汇增亮点
1.高级词汇
(1)这个展览几乎吸引了每个学生和老师的注意。
The exhibition has almost caught every student and teacher's attention.
→The exhibition has almost attracted/absorbed/appealed__to (吸引) every student and teacher's attention.
(2)这个展览激发了我对艺术的热爱。
The show inspires my love for art.
→The show fuels/arouses/stimulates/stirs__up/boosts (激发) my passion/
enthusiasm (热情) for art.
2.精准用词
这是一个接近艺术的好机会。
It is a good opportunity to get close to art.
→It is a golden/precious/fabulous (黄金的/宝贵的/极好的) opportunity to get close to art.
3.词块优先
(1)我很高兴昨天能参加我们学校学生的国画展览。
It was a great pleasure for me to attend an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings by our school's students yesterday.
→It was a great pleasure for me to take part in/participate in/engage in/be involved in (“参加”短语) an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings by our school's students yesterday.
(2)我体会到中国传统绘画的美。
I experience the beaut