Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing 应用文写作——建议信-【金版教程】2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第一册创新导学案课件PPT（译林版2020）

Section Ⅴ　Writing 应用文写作——建议信 * 注意： 1．时态应以一般现在时为主。 2．由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。 ②You have asked me for my advice on ... and I will try to make some suggestions. 你问我一些关于……的建议……我将竭尽全力给出一些建议。 ③Thanks for trusting me. It's my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips on ... 谢谢你信任我。我很高兴给你提供一些关于……的建议。 2．主体段落常用句式 ①I would like to suggest that ... 我想要建议…… ②If I were you, I would ... 如果我是你，我会…… ③As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, there is no need for you to ... 在我看来，你没有必要…… ④It seems better that ... 最好…… ⑤It would be a good idea if ... 如果……将是一个好办法。 ⑥Doing ... is a good/better choice. 做……是一个好的/更好的选择。 3．结尾常用句式 ①These are only my personal suggestions/tips. I hope you will find them useful/helpful. 这些仅仅是我个人的建议。希望对你有用。 ②I'm willing to discuss this matter with you whenever ... 无论何时……我都愿意和你讨论这些事情。 ③I believe, with your effort, you can get over/overcome these difficulties. 我相信，通过你的努力，你一定能克服这些困难。 * * 总评　本篇范文内容完整，语言规范。文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，是一篇上乘之作。 [亮点呈现] (1)It is true that ... 使用了“it is＋adj. ＋ that主语从句”的高级句式，使得开篇就很吸引人；practice with patience and you'll ... 使用“祈使句＋and ＋简单句”结构，表达简单明了。 (2)either from a Chinese teacher or from teaching ... 使用了either ... or ... 并列句式；as we Chinese do at our beginning stage是as引导的方式状语从句，句式丰富多样。 (3)Firstly, Moreover, What's more等连接词的运用使文章整体层次分明，逻辑清晰。 * * 本课结束 $$