内容正文:
专题03 应用文之活动报道
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近三年
考情分析
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年份
卷区
命题形式
话题
2023年
浙江卷1月
提纲类
校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动
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写作方法指导
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1、 新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。时态一般用过去式。
1) 标题是新闻的题目,是对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括和提炼。
2) 首段或第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence ),因此这个句子中主要讲清what(事件)、when(时间)、where(地点)和who(人物)。
3) 中段要补充时间的过程和细节,往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性、及时性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂。
4) 尾端要谈对事件或活动的认识或评价。
5) 落款/署名。
2、 新闻类型题材的一些常用语,如It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report..., It is estimated that...等。
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写作模板
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1、活动类
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(导语)In order to encourage the students to _______. Our school organized a _______ on _______(时间)at _______(地点),which _______.
(正文)It was a _______ day(介绍天气). First of all,_______. Then_______(介绍活动的过程).Finally, _______.
(评价)_________ benefited us a lot. Not only did it_______, it also _______. What a (n) _______activity!
(署名)
2、事故类
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(导语)It is reported that a _______(事件)broke out on/at_______(地点)_______(时间).
(正文)It was a _______ day(介绍天气). First of all,_______. Then_______(介绍活动的过程).
(评价)From the report, we learned a lot. Not only did it _______, it also _______.As a result, we should improve awareness doing sth.
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常用表达
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①In order to raise students' awareness of earthquake emergency evacuation, all the students, with the guide of the teachers, engaged in an evacuation drill organized by our school in the school playground.
为了提高同学们的地震应急疏散意识,全体同学在老师的带领下,在学校操场上组织了一次疏散演习。
②Aiming to build up health, students from HongXing Middle School participated in a mountain-climbing activity organized by the Students' Union last Monday morning.
为了增强体质,上周一上午,红星中学的学生参加了由学生会组织的登山活动。
③Organized by our school, all the studens paid a visit to Xiwang Agricultural Ecology Garden on the morning of April 29th, aiming to savor the experience of nature and broaden their horizons.
4月29日上午,我校组织全体同学参观了希望农业生态园,体验自然,开阔视野。
④On arriving at the destination, students, guided by the owner, were taken to admire the breathtaking beauty of various plants, followed by a