2024届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作学案（反馈+建议）

应用文写作学案（反馈+建议） 假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，最近你校举办了一年一度的“英语周”活动，请你给活动负责人Mr Ryan写一封邮件，内容包括: 1.评价活动; 2.提出建议。 审题五问： 体裁： 对象+语气： 人称： 时态： 每段要点：      Para. 1      Para. 2      Para. 3 二、段落写作 How to organize para. 1   Ø I’m Li Hua, studying in Class 2 Grade 3. As a participant fully involved in the annual English Weekly held recently, I'm writing to voice my views with sincerity and share my humble advice with you. Ø I’m Li Hua from Class 2 Grade 3. Having participated in fantastic English Weekly in the charge of you, I can hardly wait to share my opinions/thoughts concerning the activity with you. Ø I’m Li Hua , a student having just participated English Weekly .Thanks for organizing such a brilliant event, I'm writing to give you my feedback and some suggestions with sincerity. Ø I’m Li Hua from Class 2 Grade 3. Having participated in fantastic English Weekly in the charge of you, I can hardly wait to express my deep appreciation and sincere suggestions to you. 小试牛刀 (2023苏锡常镇四市5月英语二模改)如你是来自中国的交换李华, 你刚刚参观了你校博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”的展览, 请你给活动负责人Mr Ryan写一封邮件，内容包括:1. 评价展览2. 意见建议 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2022温州二模)假定你是李华, 你已经完成国外某大学的网络课程学习。请你给该课程负责人写一封关于 课程学习反馈的邮件, 内容包括:1. 你的评价;2. 你的建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How to make evaluation in para. 2 1.精确的形容词 appealing，吸引人的 remarkable引人注目的 informative增长见闻的 memorable 令人难忘的 fabulous极好的，绝妙的 brilliant巧妙的 inspiring鼓舞人心的 enlightening启发性的 uplifting令人振奋的 intriguing非常有趣的 praiseworthy值得称赞的 unparalleled 无与伦比的 well-organized 组织得井井有条的 well-executed 执行得很好 well-planned 规划得周到的 well-received 受到良好反响的、 fun-packed充满乐趣的 fun-filled充满乐趣的 eye-opening 开拓视野的 2.活动评价常用短语 Ø stimulate students’ enthusiasm; Ø evoke/ arouse/ stir up/ cultivate/ nurture/ develop ……passion/