第一部分 写作基础（第1-5讲）-【红对勾讲与练】2024版新高考英语大一轮复习全新方案写作突破

第一部分 　 写作基础 第一讲　 表达正确———规避常犯的 9 大错误 　 　 考生写作中常犯的错误主要表现在词性不明、措 辞不当、用法不妥、重复累赘、句法混乱、中式英语、拼 写与标点错误等。 下面通过整理归类,列举正误例 句,指出错误所在,总结其规律,帮助考生尽快提高英 语书面语言的准确表达能力。 一、词性不明 误: Those who strongly against the idea think animals will lose their freedom and nature if caged in the zoo. 正:Those who are strongly against the idea think animals will lose their freedom and nature if caged in the zoo. 分析:误将介词作动词:against(反对)是介词而 不是动词,用介词表达动作意义,要加系动词 be; for 为其反义词,意为“同意”。 二、措辞不当 误:Under the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons I had missed. 正:With the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons I had missed. 正: Thanks to the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons I had missed. 分析:思维方式差异:“在……的帮助下”实则是 “由于……的帮助”, under 常用于“under the leadership / protection of...”。 三、用法不妥 误:Finally we were shown around the playground at the far back of the school, where there were some boys had a football game. 正:Finally we were shown around the playground at the far back of the school, where there were some boys having a football game. 分析:此处 have 作非谓语,应用-ing 形式表示主 动关系。 四、重复累赘 误:The moment when I think of my motto, I􀆳ll become energetic and devote myself to what I􀆳m doing. 正:The moment I think of my motto, I􀆳ll become energetic and devote myself to what I􀆳m doing. 分析:the moment / minute / instant...或 each / every / next / the first time...等名词性短语作从属连词引导时 间状语从句时,其后不再接 when。 五、句法混乱 误:Though it took us some time to help him, but we were happy anyway. 正:Though it took us some time to help him, we were happy anyway. 正:Tho