应用文练习写作之活动感悟与建议+评论+短文-2024届高三英语一轮复习

应用文练习写作之活动感悟与建议+评论+短文 活动感悟与建议 假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，最近你校举办了一年一度的“英语周”活动，请你给活动负责人 Mr. Ryan 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.评价活动； 2.提出建议。 下水文 Dear Mr. Ryan, Last week witnessed the tremendous success of the annual “English Week”, which was in the charge of you. Therefore, I’m writing to give you some feedback. Especially, I cannot express my amazement enough about how the event kicked off in such a creative and grand way – the English song competition literally took my breath away, setting the tone for the whole week and highlighting its theme “English, bridging the gap between China and the world.” A diversity of activities, ranging from spelling bee and dubbing game to English movie night, aroused everyone’s passion to introduce Chinese culture to others in English. There is room for improvement, though. A part of the “English riddle solving” event saw some disorder -- several buzzers didn’t work. If possible, arrange for some students to test devices beforehand. Anyway, thank you for a whole week of fun and learning!(143w) Sincerely, Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Mr. Ryan, I’m Li Hua. Having experienced the annual “English Week”, I’m writing to give my feedback and provide some suggestions. Admirably, with such a great diversity of activities, ranging from English dubbing competition to talent show, many students extinguished themselves with a high level of English competence. Besides, the carefully selected prizes for the winners literally amazed everyone present. However, I have noticed that there are some students who are unable to participate in any of the activities. Thus, I think it would be better if there could be some activities less competitive or of pure fun, allowing everyone an opportunity to get involved, such as English corner and appreciating English movies. Your consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated. Wish the event a greater success next year.(128w) Yours, Li Hua 应用文写作（满分15分）       假定你是李华，你在暑期里参观了市博物馆举办的一次“遇见中国戏曲(Meet the Chinese Opera)”的展览，请你为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：