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学科网书城 品牌书店·知名教辅·正版资源 b.zxxk.com☐ 您身边的互联网+教辅专家 #Section VII Writing 写作培优·增彩增分 /审文体·谋布局·演分写作 故事类记叙文 文体解读 本单元的写作重点是记叙文，描述所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、传记、 游记、日记、新闻报道等。 课文展示 写作手法 The Final Sprint [文章结构] It was the final sprint of the Santa 首段：交代故事发生的时间、人物和地点等： Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in 中段：故事的发展与高潮： Spain.Fans lined the road to the finishing 尾段：故事的结局及作者的感想和评论等。 line,cheering on the competitors..—故事 [相关词句] 发生的背景 1.交代时间的常用表达： Ismael Esteban,in third place.was one day:the other day:last week;when I was..years just ahead of his competitor,Agustin old:a long time ago;on a dark,rainy night;on the Navarro,with only 300 metres to the weekend;once upon a time;during the summer finishing line.Esteban had been cycling as hard as he could for hours and with the holidays finishing line in sight all the cyclists began 2交代地点的常用表达： to speed up to cross it Then,suddenly on the way to school:on the way home;at the Esteban got a puncture.What should he do? crossing:at the foot of the mountain:at the airport Give up or continue?Esteban threw his 3交代时间，地点和相关人物的典型句型： bike over his shoulders and raced towards sb was/were doing,in someplace when..某人正在 the finishing line,—故事的发展 某地做…这时… Just a few seconds later,fourth-placed sb was/were about to do...when...=sb Navarro caught up with him.Surely,he was/were on the point of doing,when某人正要 could simply overtake Esteban and come 做…这时… third.But Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.The two cyclists sb had just done..when某人刚刚做了…这 reached the finishing line with Esteban 时… ahead on foot,Navarro just behind 4推动情节发展（事情经过） him Navarro had let Esteban finish in third then,suddenly,immediately,while,when,as, place,while he came fourth The audience not...until... was amazed at his show of sportsmanship 5.介绍故事的结果或谈自己的感想 and cheered and clapped for the Personally,I think that... 独家授权侵权必究· 享学科网书城 团 品牌书店·知名教辅·正版资源 b.zxxk.com 您身边的互联网+教辅专家 cyclists.After the race,Navarro said,"I What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was didn't want to wi