第五部分 读后续写 第四节 读后续写话题详析-【创新教程】2024高考英语写作一本通（新高考）

第四节　读后续写话题详析 话题一　比赛收获类 [典题示例](２０２３􀅰新课标Ⅰ卷) 　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文. 　　WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingconＧ test．Isaidnowithoutthinking．Ididnotlovewriting．MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglish wasonlymysecondlanguage．WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadalＧ lowedmeto present mypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicby actingoutaplay,whereI playedaltheparts．Noonelaughedharderthanhedid． So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail? Hisreply: “BecauseIloveyourstories．Ifyou􀆳rewilingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotat this．”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry． IchosePaulRevere􀆳shorseasmysubject．PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBoston whorodeahorseatnightonApril１８,１７７５toLexingtonto warnpeoplethatBritishsoldiers werecoming．Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse􀆳smouth．Notabriliantidea,but funny;andunlikely􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍tobeanyoneelse􀆳schoice． Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired? Havedoubts?Did hewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍．Igottired．Ihaddoubts．Iwantedtoquit．But , likeRevere􀆳shorse,Ikeptgoing．Iworkedhard．Ichecked myspeling．Iaskedmyoldersister tocorrect mygrammar．IcheckedoutahalfＧdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary．I even 􀪍􀪍 readafewofthem． WhenI handedin theessayto myteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid, “Great．Now,writeitagain．”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍．WhenIfinalyfinishedit , thethoughtof winning hadgiven waytotheenjoyment􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍􀪍 of writing．IfIdidn􀆳t win ,I wouldn􀆳tcare． 注意: １．续写词数应为１５０左右; ２．请按如下格式作答. 　　Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews． 　 　 　 　 　 　　Iwenttomyteacher􀆳sofficeaftertheawardpresentation． 　 　 　 　 　 ２４１ 英语写作一本通􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [五步续写] 第一步　把握原文大意　明主旨和两线 主旨 大意 文章主要讲述了作为英语为非母语的主人公,原本非常讨厌写作,但是在老师的鼓励下 参加了英语作文比赛并获奖 􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋 􀪋