第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 策略三 精细打磨续写语言的4大途径-【创新教程】2024高考英语复习读后续写写作一本通（新高考）

[参考范文] 　　WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI􀆳dhadlunch．NotuntilthendidIhear mystomachrumbling(部分倒装),Ishruggedawkwardly．Asmileofsympathyflickeringacross herface,shesuddenlyturnedaroundandrushedtowardshertruck．Forasplitsecond,thegirl turnedupbreathlessly,apaperbagheldtightlyinherhand．“Hereyouare．Itwil．．．doyou good．”ShestammeredinbrokenEnglish,grinningmysteriously．Maybe,itwashertoyshedidn􀆳t needanylonger．Iwavedtothefamily,seeingthemwalkingacrossthestreethandinhand(动词Ｇing短语)． 　　Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag．Insightcameahamburgerand a２０Ｇdolarbil(完全倒装),towhichanotewasatached(定语从句)．Itread,“Iboughtthem withalmysavings．Goodluck．”Asifaboltoflightingstruckme,IgapedingratitudeandmeanＧ whilefeltastabofguiltformymisunderstandinghergoodwil．Ilookedoutofthewindoweagerly onlytofindtheirtruckjustalongside．Whatacoincidence! Thelitlegirlreturnedmeasweet smile,hertinklinglaughterfilingtheair．ItwasthefirsttimeIwasnotsickofmycartroublebut luckyforseeingabeautifulheart． 策略三　精细打磨续写语言的４大途径 　　构思好续写情节以后,下一步就是进行续写.在阅卷时,阅卷老师首要关注的是续写的语 言,因此必须注重提升语言表达的质量.首先要规避常见的语法和词汇使用方面的错误,确保拿 到及格分;再次要尽力升级写作的语言,努力达到最高档. 途径一　词汇升级　亮人一眼 ●[词汇升级１]　笼统词→具体词 ①Becauseofherhatred,shelookedathim． →Becauseofherhatred,sheglaredathim． ②Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralgoodactivities． →Asscheduled,weparticipatedinseveralinstructiveactivities． ●[词汇升级２]　简单词→高级词 ①TheadvicetheoldmangaveTomwasveryimportant． →TheadvicetheoldmangaveTomwasverysignificant/vital/critical． ②Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek． →Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek． ４１ 读后续写􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋􀪋　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ●[词汇升级３]　单词→短语 ①Hearingthebadnews,theboycriedsadly． →Hearingthebadnews,theboyburstintotearssadly． ②Afteraday􀆳swork,wealtired． →Afteraday􀆳swork,wealwornout． ●[词汇升级４]　运用有表现力的副词 ①Thedaywasbitterlycold;themoonwasshiningbrightlyinthesky． ②Havingnochoice,Islowlyraisedthebook,hopingtohidemyself． ③Iwasquietly,joyfulyandpatientlywatchingasthesunpaintedabrandＧnewday． ④Onourw