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10.读后续写深描必备词汇(修辞与高级结构)
第一部分 语义巩固
I.深度描写必备修辞技巧
1.明喻:A+表示“像”的词语+B
明喻是将具有某种共同特征的两种不相同事物连接起来的一种修辞手法。明喻的标志词常用like、 as、 as if/though。
①I froze with shock, feeling as if I had been thrown into a dark world. Weak and dizzy, I was about to fall to the ground when someone took hold of me.
我吓呆了,觉得自己好像被扔进了一个黑暗的世界。 我虚弱而眩晕,就在我快要摔倒时,有人抓住了我。
②The bus full of passengers went slowly as a snail went.
这辆满载乘客的公交车就像蜗牛爬行一样缓慢。
③She felt nervous and uneasy. Her face turned pale, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她紧张不安,脸色苍白,感觉如坐针毡。
2.明喻:A+be动词+as+adj./adv.+as+a(n)+B
常见的as ... as ... 结构有as busy as a bee (忙得团团转), as hungry as a wolf (饥肠辘辘), as proud as a peacock (傲如孔雀), as brave as a lion (勇猛如狮), as pretty as a picture (美得如画)。
①It's impossible to persuade him. He is as stubborn as a mule.
不可能说服他,他倔得就像一头驴。
②She stepped out her car and ran into the house, as happy as a bird to get home again.
她下了车,跑进屋里,高兴得像只归巢的小鸟。
3.暗喻:A+be动词+B
暗喻是直接将A事物当作B事物描写,A事物和B事物之间的联系或相似之处是暗含的。不用like, as if等标志词,一般通过be 动词或动词产生联系。
①Life is an unexplored river, full of twists and turns.
生活就像一条未被涉足的河流,充满各种曲折。
②Food and medical supplies streamed in by plane, train, truck and car.
食品和医疗用品由飞机、火车、卡车和汽车源源不断地运来。
③She is a woman with a stony heart.
她是一个铁石心肠的女人。
4.拟人:主语(表示“动物/自然现象/含蓄抽象”的名词)+用于人的谓语
拟人就是把事物人格化,赋予动物、自然现象或含蓄抽象的概念以人类的行为特点和生命力,具体形象地表达情感,使文章更生动、形象。
①With the yellow shirt dancing in the breeze, she flashed back to her happy life with Tom.
黄衬衫在微风中飞舞,她又回想起她和汤姆的幸福生活。
②The wind was whispering in the trees, and birds on the trees were singing a beautiful song.
风在林间低语,小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。
5.夸张:数词/量词/形容词+名词;副词+形容词/动词
夸张是运用丰富的想象力,在客观现实的基础上有目的地放大或缩小事物的形象特征,以增强表达效果的修辞手法,常用夸大的词语来形容事物,如数词、量词、动词、介词短语或形容词(miserable, horrible, splendid)或副词(extremely, awfully, terribly, perfectly, horribly)等渲染和修饰微不足道的事情,达到夸张的效果。
①Tom often complained with millions of reasons.
汤姆总有千千万万个理由来抱怨。
②The noise was loud enough to wake the dead.
这声音大得足以把死人吵醒。
6.排比:词语/句子+词语/句子,(and)+词语/句子
排比是把结构相同或相似、意思密切相关、语气一致的词语或句子成串地排列在一起以加强语言的气势、突出强调内容,表达强烈的感情。
①No cold winte