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应用文练习写作之意见反馈+问询信
意见反馈
试题呈现:
假定你是李华,外教Ryan给你的作业打了B,但你觉得应得A。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1. 说明你应得A的理由(至少两点);2. 提出希望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3._____________________
Yours,
Li Hua
下水作文:122
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I’m writing to discuss with you the grade I received for my recent assignment. While appreciating the time and effort you put in grading, I firmly hold that my work deserves an A.
I think my work lives up to all the requirements. Not only was it scientifically structured, making it logical, organized and easy to comprehend. Also, it presented the topic, supported by solid arguments either from professionals or based on my down-to-earth research. Of course, if there is something that I need to improve in my assignment, please give me feedback. Your perspective and guidance will definitely contribute to my future essays.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. And your reconsideration of your grading would be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文:106
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I’m writing to discuss the B grade I received for my recent assignment. While I respect your feedback, I genuinely believe that my work deserves an A grade.
The reasons are twofold. Firstly, my assignment fulfilled all the requirements. I dedicated a substantial amount of effort and time to this project, conducting thorough research and strictly following all the guidelines. Secondly, not only did my work bring forward innovative ideas, but it also presented well-structured arguments, all in a clear and mistake-free format.
It is with these considerations in mind that I respectfully request a reconsideration of my grade. Your earliest reply would be greatly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
意见反映
假如你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让他们课后练习口语,你觉得这种分组方式有问题,请写一封邮件给外教,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考范文: 95
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I really appreciate your idea of asking us to practice spoken English after cl