压轴09 个人经历类-冲刺2023年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分

压轴09 个人经历类 1． （2023·河南商丘·统考三模） 漫漫人生路，我们面临过很多次选择，不同的选择可能会决定我们不同的人生道路。站在选择的十字路口上，有的人选择积极自信，收获勇气，有的人选择磨砺心志，收获坚强，有的人待人真诚，收获友谊。请以“A right choice I’ve ever made”为题，详细描写你所做过的一次正确的选择。 要求： 1.语言表达准确，语句连贯通顺； 2.短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4.词数100左右。题目已给出，不计入总词数。 A right choice I’ve ever made _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文：                                                                          A right choice I’ve ever made      We have faced many choices along the long road of life, which determine our different paths in life. Some people choose to be positive and confident so that they gain courage, some choose to sharpen their mind, which brings them strength and some treat others sincerely to gain friendship. As a middle school student, I worked so hard at school that I tried to be the best student in my class. However, while we were looking through the test paper that the teacher had just corrected, I found out an error that my teacher missed. Instead of hiding this, I chose to tell the truth, though this would risk me of losing the first place. Highest scorer or honest person? I chose the latter.      Life is all about making choices, so make the correct choices and do the right things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应该注意不要遗漏，进而做出适当补充，添加细节，紧扣主题并突出写作重点，即自己的经历。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头部分，总述选择的重要性，不同的人有不同的选择，不同的选择带来不同的结果。 第二步，主体部分，详细描述自己的亲身经历，包括时间，地点，发生了什么，结果怎么样。 第三步，总结陈述个人的感悟，回应文章开头并期望自己及他人做出正确的选择。 [亮点词汇] ①different paths in life 不同的人生路 ②sharpen one’s mind 磨炼心志 ③look through 仔细浏览 ④instead of 代替 [高分句型] ①We have faced many choices along the long road