压轴03 叙事忆旧类-冲刺2023年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分

压轴03 叙事忆旧类

1．（2023·云南昆明·云南一模）

提示：在你的生活中，一定有某个人，某件事给你留下美好的回忆。请以 “  Gave Me A Beautiful Memory”为题。用英语写一篇短文，叙述这个美好回忆背后的人或事，并谈谈你的感受。要求：

1.请将题目补充完整，短文词数不少于60词；

2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；

3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。

 Gave Me A Beautiful Memory

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【答案】例文

My English Teacher Gave Me A Beautiful Memory

My English teacher is very important in my life, because she gave me a beautiful memory. She is short and has short hair.

I still remember that when I first came to this school, my English was not so good. So I was very afraid of answering the questions in class. But she noticed what I experienced. She helped me with my English and encouraged me to speak English in class. With the help of her, I have made great progress in English.

From her, I know that no matter what the result is, everyone should try his best.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍难忘的人；

第二步，介绍具体的事件；

第三步，介绍自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①be afraid of害怕

②help sb with sth帮助某人某事

③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事

[高分句型]

① But she noticed what I experienced.（宾语从句）

②I still remember that when I first came to this school, my English was not so good.（时间状语从句）

2．（2023·云南玉溪·统考三模）________ makes me a better person

提示：在初中三年的学习生活中，我们不断地收获、成长，成为更优秀的人。而使我们进步、成长的可能是一个物品、一件事、一个人或是一种习惯。请你以“________ makes me a better person”为题，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈使你变得更好的一个物品、一个人或是一种习惯，并叙述自己的相关经历。

要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；

2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。

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【答案】例文

Reading makes me a better person

Reading is playing an important part in our daily life. It can not only open up our eyes to the world but also make our life colorful. And reading really makes me a better person.

When I was a little girl, my mother always read comic stories to me, which made me interested in reading. When I was older, I began to read whatever I found interesting, including Robinson Crusoe, The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. I was moved by the main characters. While reading, I felt peaceful. I get all kinds of knowledge

from reading. Now I am a middle school student, I become rich in knowledge and I am better at all subjects.

As Goethe said, “One book, one world.” Now reading makes me a better person. It makes my life colorful. It also makes me more confident and braver.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；

③提示：本文主要是介绍使你变得更好的一个物品、一个人或是一种习惯，并叙述自己的相关经历，适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出话题；

第二步，详细介绍自己的相关经历

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①play an important part in在……中扮演重要角色

②not only...but also不但……而且

[高分句型]

①When I was a little girl, my mother always read comic stories to me, which made me interested in reading. (when引导的时间状语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)

②When I was older, I began to read whatever I found interesting.(whatever引导的宾语从句)

3．（2023·江苏盐城·校考二模）学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“I am proud of ________!”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你所感到自豪的人或事。

1. What/Who are you proud of? 2. Why do you feel proud of ...? ...

注意事项：（1）补全题目，如“my country, my parents, my school”等；

（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；