专题07 书面表达-学易金卷：2023年中考英语三模试题分项汇编（浙江专用）

专题07 书面表达 1、 金华市东阳市 书信作文 61．假如你是Li Hua，请针对你澳大利亚的朋友Ben来信中的问题写一封回信，提出你的建议并说说理由。 要点 参考词汇 Ben’s Problem Your Suggestions and Reasons have few friends join clubs/talk with… ask…for help/become easy-going/… 注意: 1. 短文必须包括要点内容：参考词汇可自行增删。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 短文首句已给，不计入总词数。词数：100左右。 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble at school in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Ben, I am to that are trouble school China. In your letter you said that you have few friends and feel lonely at school. I think you can join school clubs to meet more new friends. People in the same club may have the same interest. Another way to solve this problem is to be ready to help others when they are in trouble. People will be thankful and glad to make friends with you. Besides, when you come across some difficulty, you can also ask others for help. What’s more, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. In that way, you will become more easy-going and make more friends in the end. Good luck with everything! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封回信，属于书信作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，表示得知其在学校遇到的交友问题； 第二步，根据提示内容，针对交友问题，提出相应的建议，可列举具体的做法； 第三步，表示祝愿并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to help others乐于助人 ②in trouble陷入困境中 ③come across some difficulty遇到困难 ④in return作为回报 [高分句型] ①I think you can join school clubs to meet more new friends.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） ②Another way to solve this problem is to be ready to help others when they are in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句） 2、 金华市开发区 电子邮件 76．假如你是李华，你的外国好友Ale