内容正文:
社会服务
Ⅰ. 应用文写作
感谢信
(2019·浙江卷6月)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【高分范文】
Dear Alex,
①Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon, I'm eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made unbelievable progress in English. It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. ②Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm and confidence. ③No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:
1. 词汇美:文章运用了很多高级词汇,如leave for, eagerly, express one's heartfelt gratitude to, honestly speaking, under one's professional guidance, make progress, unbelievable, rank first, encounter, cheer sb. up, help sb. out, fuel, enthusiasm, convey等。
2. 句式美:①句Learning that ... 是动词ing形式短语作状语。
②句Whenever引导让步状语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句。
③句enough后接不定式作结果状语,同时运用了how引导宾语从句,这两处表达增强了感情色彩。
练习:
假定你是李华,国庆节期间参加了Angela公司的旅游团。你感到该公司的旅行路线物有所值,你对导游Lily的服务感到尤其满意。请给Angela公司写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 表示感谢。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。