07【考前热身篇】写作第一节（应用文写作）（原卷+解析）-2023届高考英语考前指导（新高考专用）

2023届高考英语考前指导(新高考专用)-考前热身篇(第一节写作) Passage 1 假如你是红星中学李华， 校英语俱乐部正在组织英语征文比赛。在talent和struggle中，你认为哪一个决定成功，并结合个人经历写篇英语文章参赛。 注意：1.词数100左右。开头句已经为你拟好，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Which factor leads to success, talent or struggle? __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【简析】 本篇写作极具开放性，但是考生对此话题都是有话可说的。根据题干中的“在talent和struggle中，你认为哪一个决定成功”，需要考生作出明确的选择，不是两者都谈。根据题干中的“并结合个人经历”，要求考生举例说明。相对来说选择“奋斗会导致成功”比较容易写，因为考生在这方面的经历会更多。当然考生也可以根据自己的实际情况选择“天赋是成功的关键”去写。 围绕标题“哪一个因素会导致成功、天赋还是奋斗？”加以适当的议论，做出自己的选择“奋斗会导致成功”，以此来引出话题。“结合个人经历”部分需要考生自拟。就“奋斗会导致成功”的话题可以从“与学习上的困难作斗争，比如：数学、英语等等科目的学习”方面进行细节设计；就“天赋是成功的关键”的话题可以从“需要一定天赋才能获得成功的学习训练科目，比如：乐器演奏、唱歌跳舞等等”方面进行细节设计。最后用一句话作出总结。 【答案1】                                  Which factor leads to success, talent or struggle? Opinions vary from person to person. But, in my viewpoint, struggle leads to success. My personal experience is a perfect example of this. During my high school years, I used to be very poor in mathematics. Because I was born without numerical talent, I found it difficult to keep up with the class. However, I did not give up, but worked as hard as I could. I constantly practice solving math problems and at the same time sought help from teachers and friends. Through hard work, I have gained a deeper understanding of mathematics and developed problem-solving skills. Eventually, I became one of the best students in my class and achieved the highest score in the final exam. We should be aware of that we should ke