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2023年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题
VII. Writing(作文)(共20分)
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “No Gains without Pains”(以“一分耕耘一分收获”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)。
成功的背后都凝聚着辛勤的付出。请结合自己的亲身经历,分享你的一个“没有耕耘就不可能有收获”的故事。
(注意:短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
2022年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题
十八、材料作文
80.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Grow up in labour ”(以“在劳动中成长”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在日常生活中,每个同学都会参与一些社会公益劳动、学校组织的劳动活动或居家时的家务劳动等,相信你们在过程中都有所感悟和收获。请你结合自身经历,谈谈你曾参与的劳动并分享一下你的所感所悟。
注意:
1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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2021年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题
VII. Writing (作文)(20 分)
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three years’ time” (以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文,标定符合不占格。)
你是否想象过,三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化?你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待?你能为此做些什么?
(注意:短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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2023年上海市崇明区中考二模英语试题
【答案】例文
No Gains without Pains
I think the saying "No pains, no gains." means we can't get anywhere in life if we don't work hard.
As we all know, scientists make progress only after years of careful research. We students get good scores after months of hard work. For example, I have improved my physics by putting in lots of effort. At school, I listened to the teacher carefully and took down lots of notes in class. And when I had questions, I asked my physics teacher or my classmates for help. After school, I finished my physics homework as soon as I got home. Also, I did lots of physics exercises. Day by day, I was making progress in physics and now I'm one of the top physics students in my class.
In short, no pains, no gains. We will achieve success as long as we work hard.
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