【考前特训】专题06：材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（苏州专用）

专题06：材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（苏州专用） 1．小说《哈利波特》中的人物“学霸”赫敏曾拥有过一个时间转换器（Time-Turner）。它能将时间拨回至你过去生命中的任意一刻。假设你也拥有了它，你最想将时间拨回至哪一刻？请以“Back to the past”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括： 1.你最想拨回至哪一刻？ 2.那一刻发生了什么？ 3.为什么你最想回到那一刻？ 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Back to the past If I could have a Time-Turner, the moment I want to go back most is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Back to the past If I could have a Time-Turner, the moment I want to go back most is a rainy day three years ago. It was a bus ride. On the way, an old man got on the bus. My mother asked me to give him my seat, but I didn’t agree. When I got home, my mother taught me a lesson. She said that we would all grow old. Loving the elderly is our traditional virtue. I realized my mistake and vowed to help others as much as possible in the future. If I could go back to that moment, I would definitely offer my seat to the old man. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏已给出的关键信息，写文章讲讲你想吧时间拨回至哪一刻。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍想把时间拨回至哪一刻； 第二步，介绍发生了什么事情； 第三步，介绍为何想要回到那一刻。 [亮点词汇] ①got on 上车 ②ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事 ③traditional virtue 传统美德 [高分句型] ①When I got home, my mother taught me a lesson.（when引导时间状语从句） ②Loving the elderly is our traditional virtue.（动名词作主语） 2．“Kids’ Fun”杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Just as our magazine’s name, “Kids’ Fun”, we pay special attention to the fun kids have. Over your school days in junior high, you have experienced many trips. Which one is the most unforgettable one? Write a passage to tell us about it. We are looking forward to your sharing. 注意： 1.要点齐全，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，