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专题04:材料作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训
1.假定你是李华, 请回复你的外国笔友Steve的求助邮件, 给他提出至少3条建议并说明理由。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名,词数80个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua From: Steve
Hi Li Hua,I’m not happy because I can’t get along with my parents. I don’t like to eat vegetables and do sports. I seldom help to do house work at home. I don’t often talk to my parents. All these make my parents sad. They want me to say “sorry” after I make a mistake and often say “I love you” to them. I hope to grow up soon. Then I can be free.
Steve
To: SteveFrom: Li Hua
Hi Steve,My friends and I have the same problems as you. I think you should
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Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Hi Steve,
My friends and I have the same problems as you. I think you should eat more vegetables and do more sports because they are good for your health. Also helping to do housework is your duty because it can make your home clean and tidy. You’d better listen to your parents carefully and talk to them openly so that you can understand each other better. If you do something wrong, then say sorry to them and don’t make the same mistake. Please remember your parents love you very much and often say “I love you” to them. Hope things will work out.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,形式是一封邮件;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:考生应先认真阅读来信邮件,并提炼出内容要点,回信时候应注意不要遗漏,可适当补充发挥,使用正确的词汇和句型,注意语句的通顺,使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的观点,建议笔友听父母的建议;
第二步,根据来信内容,分别给出自己的建议,并说明理由,应劝告笔友多吃蔬菜,多做运动,多和父母交流以及多表达对父母的爱意;
第三步,结尾表达希望自己的建议有效,
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②had better do sth最好做某事
③make the same mistake犯同样的错误
④work out起作用
[高分句型]
①Please remember your parents love you very much and often say “I love you” to them.(