内容正文:
读后续写专题讲解--高一英语第55期周报
原文材料:
"Eric! Eric! Wake up! You will be late for school today!"Eric's mum said while pulling Eric out of bed.
“Mum, don't worry!” Eric said as he quickly got up, put on his clothes, took his bag, and ran to the bus stop.
Recently, Eric had gotten enrolled(注册)in a new school so he knew no one there and had made no friends yet. At school, Eric longed for the bell to ring for the class break so that he could eat something. After a while, when the bell rang, Eric quickly opened his bag to take out his money to buy some food. But just then he remembered he had forgotten to take the money his mum had given him.
Not knowing what to do, he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench(长凳)in front of the dining room. He saw a few of his classmates there, among them was Bob. He was one of the richest kids in his class but he was very unfriendly. But as Eric was new, he didn't know much about anyone.
Eric thought he might borrow some money from Bob and return it to him the next day. So he got up and slowly went towards Bob and asked if he could borrow some money.
Bob smirked(幸灾乐祸地笑)and said,“I knew you were a loser,but I didn't know you were a beggar too?" Bob laughed out so loud that the other kids heard and also made fun of Eric.
It was too humiliating(丢脸的)for Eric. He could not answer Bob and slowly walked back towards an empty bench. He could still hear them laughing at him in the distance. When he reached the bench, he noticed something lying near it. It was a wallet. He picked it up and recognized it as Bob's, as he remembered Bob showing it to his friends and saying that his uncle bought it for him from the UK.
Para1: First, he thought to keep it a secret.
Para2: “Because I was told by my family that ‘Honesty won't let you down’,” explained Eric.
原则:原文一致原则; 正能量原则; 解决问题原则。
踩雷点:
1. 角色称呼:Eric, Bob不能写成I; 两个人同时出现时,不能都用he代指。
2. 头重脚轻,狗尾续貂:第一段写得很丰富,而第二段字数不足,或衔接不上。
材料分析:
1. 明线 Plot line:
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