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专题07 读后续写
读后续写,大部分文章都是按照这个模式进行内容的续写:
(1)情绪:消极情绪
(2)细节:进一步解释描写
(3)转折:个人的努力或借助外界
(4)转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
(5)失望:但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)新法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
(7)结局:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
(8)总结:点题,呼应前文
第1步 情绪:情绪描写
第2步 细节:进一步解释描写
【例1】
情绪描写∶笑
smile brightly; laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing;
wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile
看到直升飞机,Jane高兴地笑了起来。
(1)At the sight of the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.
(2)Seeing the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.
(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,Jane's ears/face lit up with delight.
(4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,a bright smile lit up Jane's face.
【例2】
情绪描写∶哭
cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying;(one's eyes)brim with/be full of/be filled with tears
(1)A lump came to his throat.他哽咽欲哭。
(2)Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。
(3)Her eyes brimmed with tears.她的眼里满含泪水。
(4) Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
【例3】
情绪描写∶ 害怕
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless;in(a)panic; in a cold sweat;be full of fear; be filled with terror;be rooted to the spot; freeze;run away; flee; one's knees feel weak; (hands) sweat
我感到很害怕。
(1) I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in (a) panic/was full of fear.
(3)I stood rooted to the spot,brimming with fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(5)I froze with terror, too scared to move.
(6)I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating.
【例4】
情绪描写∶ 高兴激动
v. dance;jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy excitement; whistle; be overcome with happiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one's eyes) twinkle;(one's heart) beat/pound wildly
adj. happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy
当她知道考试结果时,她兴奋极了。
(1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/thrilled.
(2) When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
(3)When she knew th