专题11 书面表达-学易金卷：2023年中考英语一模试题分项汇编（江苏专用）

专题11 书面表达 一、材料作文 1．（2023·江苏淮安·校考一模）春季是游园的大好时节。然而，一些游客的不文明行为让美丽的景色大打折扣。请根据要点就此写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的观点。 要点： 1.描写公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动。 2.请列举三个不文明游园的行为。 3.提出文明游园的建议或希望。 注意： 1.总词数 80-100。 2.文章中不得出现真实的个人信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Spring is a good time to visit parks. There are a lot of colorful flowers and birds in the trees. People often go to parks to enjoy the beauty of the spring. They can do many things in parks, such as having picnics, taking photos, doing sports and so on. However, the uncivilized behaviors of some tourists have become a hot topic. For example, someone likes talking and laughing loudly while enjoying the scenery; someone drops litter everywhere after having picnics in the parks; someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property. It’s everyone’s duty to protect the parks. I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those bad habits. When we are traveling in the parks, we should obey the rules and take care of the environment. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中提出游园的建议或希望，注意要点要齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动； 第二步，列举三个不文明的游园行为：大声喧哗、随地乱扔垃圾和踩踏草坪； 第三步，提出文明游园的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of大量，大量的 ②and so on等等 ③take care of注意 ④pay attention to注意，留心 [高分句型] ①Someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not tak