专题07 书面表达-学易金卷：2023年中考英语一模试题分项汇编（全国通用）

专题07 书面表达 一、话题作文 1．（2023·山西·校联考一模）刚刚过去的一年给我们留下了难以磨灭的记忆，大到冬奥会成功举办、中国空间站顺利建成；小到居家学习、与好友重逢……总有一些瞬间值得记忆，它们能够触动人心，使人备受鼓舞，倍感温暖。 某英语报社开展了以“The Most Unforgettable Moment”为主题的征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文，分享你最难忘的瞬间。 内容包括： ·the most unforgettable moment for you ·what you have learned from it 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 参考词汇仅供参考； 3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 Word Bank inspire  v. 鼓舞 the Winter Olympics 冬奥会 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Life is full of unforgettable moments. These moments always touch us and bring us senses of warmth, pride and even achievement. When it comes to the most unforgettable moment, a story enters my mind. One day, I visited the art museum. After listening to the story of Chinese embroidery art, I began to learn to make embroidery works. The artist taught me carefully and I practiced many times. To my joy, the patterns I made in embroidery were simple but beautiful. The moment I saw my work, a sense of achievement rose from the bottom of my heart. From this experience, I have realized that only when you make an effort to do something can you bring out the best in you and then you will enjoy more unforgettable moments. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作内容要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引入话题； 第二步，具体叙述“难忘的瞬间”； 第三步，表达自己的感受和从经历中学到的内容。 [亮点词汇] ① be full of 充满，装满 ② to one’s joy 让某人高兴的是 ③ rise from 升起 [高分句型] ① When it comes to the most unforgettable