读后续写环境描写 讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

第四节 环境描写 环境描写在续写中一般配合人物经历或故事情节推进出现，服务于人物、情节的塑造，而非“为了写景而写景”，故不应该占据太多的篇幅，一般来说1~2句就足够了。 1. 地点方位的描写 续写中最常出现的环境——地点方位的描写常用“完全倒装句”这一句式结构。 例1: In the middle of the forest lies a beautiful lake. 翻译：森林中央有一个美丽的湖。 例2: At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Mei's age. 翻译：其中一张桌子旁坐着一家人，他们有两个女儿，都和MeiMei差不多大。 例3: Now, not far away, around the bonfire are dancing many humans, hand in hand. 翻译：现在，不远处，算火周围有许多人在手拉着手跳舞。 例4: At the seaside stood thick and tall palm trees with green coconuts hanging from them. 翻译：海边盖立着高大的棕桐树，树上挂着绿色的椰子。 例5: No more than 20 paces away in the bog was a huge Alaskan timber wolf-caught in one of Trapper George's traps. 翻译：不到20步远的沼泽地里，一只巨大的阿拉斯加大灰狼被捕猎者George的陷阱困住了。 2. 环境的直接描写 (1) 景/物描写 景/物的直接描写通常会直接用物作主语，有时也会拟人化，搭配人的动作使用。 例1: The snow felt crispy and crunchy under our feet. 翻译：我们脚下的雪非常松脆。 例2: The snow crunched under our boots as we walked down the street. 翻译：我们走在街上时，靴子下的雪嘎吱作响。 例3: Gold and brown leaves crunched under Dora's boots as she made her way down the sidewalk. 翻译：当Dora沿着人行道走着时，金色和棕色的叶子在她的靴子下嘎吱作响。 例4: The moon shone silver on my brother's fur, and the stars were as bright as diamonds. 翻译：月亮照在我哥哥的毛皮上，闪耀着银色的光芒，星星像钻石一样明亮。 例5: The moon washed the woods in a gentle light. The stars twinkled like a child's curious eyes blinking with anticipation. 翻译：月亮用柔和的光洗刷着树林。星星闪烁着，像孩子好奇的眼睛闪烁着期待。 例6: The sound came swiftly nearer, and became a wild roar, filling the whole valley. 翻译：这声音很快就走近了，变成了一声狂吼，响彻整个山谷。 例7: About one hour later Gilbert raised his head, and the moon was low in the west. Above the noise of the water and the whistle of the wind, he heard a familiar sound-the high, sharp neigh of a horse. It was Roger that he heard! 翻译：大约一个小时后，Gilbert抬起头，月亮在西边很低。在水的响声和风的哨声上方，他听到了一个熟悉的声音——马的高而尖的嘶鸣声。他听到的是Roger的声音！ 例8: It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just