01 “三首歌” 学会环境描写-备考2023年新高考英语读后续写四大招式

学科网 学科网原到，让学司更名易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 读后续写大招一：“三首歌”学会环境描写 环境描写，是续写重要描写手段之一，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境 描写可以使文章读起来有真实感。 比较下面两种表达： I go to school happily. n上环境描写：The morning sunshine shining gent山y,fragrant flowers smiling from ear to ear,.green trees swaying cheerfully,I together with Tom and Jerry set out early riding my bike,talking and singing all the way. 环境描写示例： 1.I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky,the song of the birds,moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound. 2.The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring heavily,whipping against the branches of lined tress, a strong feeling of horror creeping on me. ● 环境描写大招 刘德华演唱《冰雨》：冷冷的冰雨在我脸上胡混地护 形容词意象介短 词动词 The icy rain is whipping my face mercilessly. 大招一：形容词+意象+动词+副过方位介短 招式体验： 1)The wind blew. 改写：The gentle warm wind blew softly on the face.. 2)The trees waved. 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学神闪原引,让学习更容易! P.ZXXK.COM学科网精品频道全力推荐 改写:The tall geen trees waved quietly on the roadsides 3)The sunshone 改写:The morming sunshoe on the ground warmly and gently. The warm morning sunhght fell on the groundmildly 具体续写过程中,可将三个(多个)意象结合起来,形成排比句,综合表达,构建更动感的画面.如: That night windhowedruthessly.夜风无情地呼啸着. Someunknowncreaturesmurmuredin the dark一些不知名的生物在黑暗中响喃自语. The moonightshone weakly on the ground月光微弱地照在地上. 合并:The might windhowedruhessly,nameless creatures murmuredin the dark and the moonight shone weakly on the ground 排比句,意象1+动词1,意象2+动词2,and意象3+动词3. 场景综合表达示例、 1.stream溪流Theatemoonsunlightfell on the grass, the wind blew lightly,and the water flew silently down the stream. 2. flame火火:Hot air enweloped the room, the ighs glowed in the smoke, and flames spread wildly in all directons 3.beach海边:The mildsumlightfell on the snd, the ar blew softly from the sea, and the crowds played happily onthe beach 4. lake湖边:The thin clouds flewsowly n the sky, the tall green trees waved wildly in the wind, and the sunlight shone on the lake 5. classroom: Lighs shone brightly on the f