2023届高三英语写作专项读后续写之温暖亲情类高分技巧学案

读后续写之温暖亲情类高分技巧 描写“悲哭”的语言积累 1.fight/hold/keep back tears  忍住眼泪 2.weep无声地流泪 3.sob 呜咽、抽泣 4.burst into tears/burst out  crying  突然大哭 5.squall  嚎啕大哭 6.tears streamed down one’s  face/cheeks  泪流满面 7.with tears glistening in one’s  eyes  眼有泪光 8.with tears welling up in one’s eyes  热泪盈眶 9.shedding tears of joy   撒下喜悦的泪水 ●描写“喜乐”的语言积累 1.in high spirits 心情愉快 2.in a good mood  心情好 3.can hardly conceal excitement  几乎无法掩饰兴奋 4.a mixture of excitement and happiness  既兴奋又开心 5.be overjoyed at  对......感到非常高兴 6.be beside oneself with joy/be wild with joy  欣喜若狂 7.brighten one’s heart   使某人心情愉快 ●描写“生气愤怒”的语言积累 1.arouse one’s displeasure   引起某人的不快 2.be displeased at one ’ s  conduct  对某人的行为感到不满： 3.flame with anger 气得满脸通红 4.storm out of the room in a burst of anger 气愤地冲出房间 5 feel annoyed 感到恼怒的 6.I was seized by anger.  我充满了愤怒。 7.His anger boiled over. 他的愤怒爆发了。 8.He could hardly/scarcely  contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。 9.His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 10.He glared at me with burning eyes .他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 11.His face clouded with anger .他气得脸色阴沉。 ●温暖亲情类续写范例解析 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 With a broad smile on her lips, 15yearold Sirin rushed to her mom to show off her new painting. But Mom raised her eyebrows with eyes wide open and spoke in an impatient tone, “No time, baby. Right now I am busy with an important talk. Just wait for some time, OK？”  Holding her oil painting, she frowned, and then searched for her dad. “Dad, see what I have done，” Sirin announced aloud in a thrilling voice. Her dad turned around while adjusting his tie, grinned at her, and showed his thumbs up!  Immediately, blowing her two cheeks, Sirin replied angrily, “Dad, you haven't seen it yet.”  He smiled at her saying, “No time, baby. I will see it later.” He just patted her back lovingly, kissed her forehead, and rushed for his office.  She was not a kid to be pleased with simple gesture or smile. She stood there for a few seconds, and then stormed off to her own bedroom. Hot air was blowing from her nostril