内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
关于灾难的说明文
一、文体特点
说明文是以介绍和说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言来解说事物、阐明事理或交代步骤,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。说明文类的书面表达多以图画、表格或文字的形式出现,并往往融合在应用文体中进行考查。有关灾难中如何逃生指导方面的说明文,通常向读者介绍应急事件中应采取的正确、合理的措施。
二、审题谋篇
有关灾难指导方面的说明文正文内容一般包括三部分:
第一部分:灾难前的准备应对事宜介绍;
第二部分:灾难中应采取的措施指导;
第三部分:灾难后的补救说明。
三、知识储备
1.灾难前常用语
(1)Thousands of fires break out every year,causing...
(2)Great floods hit the south of...,and great damage is done to...
(3)Millions of people are affected by...
(4)Preparations should be made to...
(5)In order to reduce the damage of...,people should prepare...and...
(6)More and more people have become aware that...
2.灾难中常用语
(1)During the...,we should keep our head.
(2)Leave the...immediately and run to...
(3)Do not take lifts...
(4)You are required to...
(5)You can move under...or go to a small room.
3.灾难后常用语
(1)Stay away from...
(2)Wait for some experts to offer help/assistance.
(3)Only in this way can we...
[写作任务]
假如你是李华,你市近来有大暴雨,并有可能引发洪水。请根据提示写一篇英语短文,提醒人们做好防范工作,内容包括:
1.天气预报连续播放暴雨预报。
2.洪水暴发期间应采取的措施。
3.洪水后的防范及救援。
According to the weather forecast,a severe storm is on the way,and is to hit our city the day after tomorrow.
Hope everyone can stay calm and safe.
[思路点拨]
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本文是说明文。
2.确定人称:本文主要采用第二人称。
3.确定时态:说明文通常使用一般现在时,适当添加一般将来时。
二、基本结构
开头:介绍天气预报,引起人们对天气的注意,告知人们暴雨有可能导致洪水;
主题:具体介绍在洪水前、中及后的应对措施;
结尾:希望人们生命安全,工作有序。
[词汇热身]
1. weather forecast 天气预报
2. a severe storm 严重的暴风雨
3. hit 袭击
4. be on the way 马上来临
5. last 持续,延续
6. make full preparations 做好充分准备
7. citizens 市民
8. flashlight 手电筒
9. the rescue team 救援队
10. an electric shock 电击
[主要句式]
1.The stormy weather will last more than two days, which is expected to cause great floods .
暴风雨天气将持续两天多,预计会引发大洪水。
2. Therefore before the storm comes ,citizens in our ci