2023届山东省枣庄市高三上学期第一次调研英语试卷作文解析学案

2023 枣庄一调英语满分作文 第一节(满分15分) 假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展“The Sports I Like”征文比赛。请用英语写一篇 短文投稿。内容包括： 1.喜爱的体育运动； 2.喜爱的原因； 3.运动的收获。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 【解析】 本题要求介绍一种喜爱的体育运动，可知以现在时为主，主语多用第一人称。 根据题目要求，本文可分三段来写： 第一段，直接说明自己喜欢的体育运动。 第二段，喜爱此运动的原因以及此运动的吸引人的地方。 第三段，总结自己从此运动中获得的进步及益处 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My parents grew up poor. But as a family,we were comfortable,though we didn't have much what would be considered luxuries. One year, my father went on a trip to Italy and brought my mother an opal ring. It was her favorite stone,and she cherished that ring. It represented Dad's love for her. Dad died at the age of 53 in 1980 after a grueling battle with cancer. Mom was working at Burlington Coat Factory Department store. She usually wore the ring to work. Over the years,the ring became impossible for my Mom to wear because of her swollen knuckles(指关节).Ihad the ring fitted with a clasp so that Mom could wear it again. She took great pride in the frequent compliments as she got on that ring. One day during her shift,the ring slipped off. She didn't realize it until the following day.Mom was sad.The ring did not have a high monetary value,but it meant as much to her as life itself. I decided to go and look for it. I encountered Chloe,one of my Mom's co-workers at my Mom's workplace. She led me to the store where Mom worked,and then left. It was packed with clothes,racks and tables. I started row by row crawling on the floor to see if I could find the ring underneath all the clothes. When I got to the last row and hadn't found the ring,the thought occurred to me that it might have fallen into the pocket of a coat as my Mom was hanging or rearranging the clothes. I started feeling around in the pockets of some of the coats,but quickly abandoned. There were at least 20,000 pieces of clothing in that department. The attempt seemed useless. 注意： 1. 续写的词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I stood b