内容正文:
写作园地
话题写作——看图作文
本单元的写作任务为看图作文。看图作文属于记叙文文体,在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物,然后写事件的原因及发展过程,最后写结果。
1.开头:简要介绍事情发生的时间、地点等。
2.故事发展:以时间为主线,按时间顺序,分别描述每幅图的要点和细节,注意衔接与过渡。
3.结尾:得到的启示或者体会。
注意:要把握住记叙文的六个要素,即时间 (when),地点 (where),人物 (who),事件 (what),原因 (why)和过程 (how)。把握好这六个要素,写看图类记叙文就成功了一半。
1.开头常用句式
①Last summer I spent a twoweek vacation at Hawaii.
去年夏天我在夏威夷度过了两周的假期。
②As it became hotter and hotter, I went together with my friends to go swimming.
天气越来越热,我和朋友去游泳。
③It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, and the street was deserted.
那是一个刮风下雨的早晨。天空阴沉,街道上空无一人。
2.主体段落常用句式
①The occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening where everybody will share his experiences to others.
这次活动将于晚上7点开始,每个人都将与他人分享自己的经历。
②There will be activities, such as singing, dancing and drama performances.
有许多活动,比如唱歌、跳舞和话剧表演。
③The lecture will be held this afternoon at two o'clock in the school hall.
讲座将于今天下午两点在学校礼堂举行。
④Since this event aims to help more people learn about China's education system.
这次活动的目的是帮助更多人了解中国的教育制度。
⑤I'm sure you will take an interest in the activities at the party.
我相信你会对聚会上的活动感兴趣的。
⑥After school, they would like to walk arm in arm.
放学后,他们喜欢挽臂而行。
3.结尾常用句式
①After that, how delighted we were!
从那以后,我们多么高兴!
②Only then did I realize that a good education is the gateway to success.
直到那时我才意识到良好的教育是通往成功之路。
③The activity/thing implies that we should take some measures to solve it.
这个活动/事情说明了我们应该采取措施来解决它。
假设你是红星中学的学生李华,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记,记述上周六你和父母一起参加奥林匹克森林公园健步走活动的过程。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.周记的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Saturday, I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk, and I'm Fit”. ________________________
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答案
Only then