Welcome Unit 教材译文(教师用书)-2022-2023学年新教材高中英语必修第一册【正禾一本通】同步课堂高效讲义（人教版2019）

课下自主研析·写与读系列(一) Task 1　写作新题型·读后续写 认识读后续写 一、题型简述 1．所需阅读的短文词数在350词以内； 2．续写部分分为两段。根据每段首句续写下文，使之构成一篇完整的150词左右的短文； 3．以叙事记叙文为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是故事线索的逻辑性较强。 二、写作步骤 1．读文 通过阅读，定位所提供语言材料的核心信息，包括核心单词、短语和句子等，目的是梳理内容的发展脉络和推进方向。 2．构思 (1)“两段首句定一框”，即根据所给两段的首句，可以构思第一段的框架。续写第一段的内容设计既要考虑与上文的融洽衔接，同时也要考虑本段和最后一段开头语的呼应和衔接，而后者是容易忽视的部分。简言之，第一段的内容设计要成功搭建本段与前文、后文的桥梁。 (2)“二段首句正能量”，即根据所给第二段的首句和正能量的结尾，可以构思第二段的内容。续写第二段是文章的结尾，要关注与文章开头的遥相呼应，根据具体语境弘扬感情的真、人性的善或拼搏的美，从而凸显主题，升华精神。 3．初稿 (1)分析原文语言表达方面的显著特征，观察有无直接引语、各类从句、特殊句型、非谓语动词等。通过模仿和创造，尽量提高与原文的协同，力求在各个语言层次(关键词、短语和句型等)的表达风格上和原文保持一致。 (2)先在头脑里组织整个句子的语法结构和内容走势，然后动笔书写，从而下笔流畅、整洁美观，避免字字艰难、反复涂改。 (3)灵活运用各种描写手法，以帮助打造鲜活灵动的人物形象和丰富充实的情节链条。以动作描写、语言描写和心理描写为主，辅之以恰当的外貌描写和环境描写。 4．润色 核查连接词、词数、语法词汇和标点等。核查有无连接词的使用，若无，应增添连接词，以保持上下文的衔接和连贯。字数控制在150～160词范围内为佳。 三、题型示例 　　(2021·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a．m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porr