专题11 应用文写作（11）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考

研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考 Part1 应用文写作文（十一） 1．（2014·湖南卷）学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_______”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。 内容： 1.说明设计理由 2.介绍新功能。 注意;: 1.词数不少于120个字 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My magic pen It is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically. More importantly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will be shown within a minute. In this way, the time that we spend in taking notes will be saved. We will be able to have more time to go over our lessons or engage in something else that we are interested in.It sounds so great, right? 【导语】本书面表达是一篇说明文。所给出的题材十分贴近学生生活，学生能够从日常生活中的熟悉的物品适当发挥想象。 【详解】要求写一篇说明文，所给的要点也很清楚：说明学生所选物品设计理由；介绍此物品新功能。写作的时候注意以下几点：1、切合题意。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、简明扼要。此题材学生都有话可说，但要注意说明清楚：为什么要设计此物品？此物品有哪些新功能？要点要全面。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。 【点睛】范文简明扼要的介绍了自己创新作品。使用了些高级句型，使得文章的水平更加高级。例如： It is a magic pen that I intend to design for the competition organized by the school.使用了that引导的定语从句；To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every class, I want the pen to be equipped with a special function, which can help me record what the teacher say in class automatically.使用了不定式短语做目的状语，我which引导的非限制性定语从句，what引导的宾语从句，是典型的高分句型。More importantly, what has been recorded can be easily transformed into text in a short time and the text will be shown within a minute. 使用了主语从句。To make it easier and more convenient for students to take notes during every cl