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写作园地 话题写作——描述一个事件
描述一个事件,这类写作通常会选择一些比较有代表性的事件或者一些难忘的事件来写,比如第一次为妈妈准备母亲节礼物,第一次把米饭煮糊了,成人礼,学校的百年校庆等等。写作时,要注意以下几点:
1.说明描述这个事件的原因。
2.写清楚事件的时间、地点、人物及事件的内容。
3.按照一定的顺序来布局,根据实际情况可以按照时间顺序、空间顺序等来写作。
4.写出自己对事件的感受,抒发自己的情感。
1.开头常用句式
①I am planning a birthday party for my 80-year-old grandma.
我正在为奶奶筹划80岁生日宴。
②What has left an unforgettable impression on me is when I saved a boy two months ago.
给我留下难忘印象的是两个月前我救了一个小男孩。
③As Christmas neared, the children became more and more excited.
随着圣诞节的临近,孩子们越来越兴奋。
2.主体段落常用句式
①We bought a big birthday cake and gave some presents to my grandpa.
我们买了一个大生日蛋糕,并且送给爷爷一些礼物。
②On weekends I always go fishing with my Grandpa.
周末我总是和我的爷爷一起去钓鱼。
③The campus was decorated with some flowers and slogans, collected from some creative teachers and students.
校园里装饰着一些鲜花和标语,这些是从一些富有创意的老师和同学那收集的。
④You could twist your ankle in a basketball game, but then be afraid to ever play again.
你可能会在一场篮球比赛中扭脚,并从此害怕再打球。
⑤A grand art and cultural show would be held in our school with the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of our school.
我们学校将会举行一场盛大的文艺表演以庆祝70周年校庆。
⑥There was a grand celebration meeting where some performances of entertainment were put on.
有一个盛大的庆祝会议,展示了一些娱乐表演。
3.结尾常用句式
①How do people celebrate New Year in your country?
你们国家的人怎样庆贺新年?
②He would never forget the first time he watched a basketball game.
他永远不会忘记自己第一次看篮球比赛的情景。
③I found myself having more fun so that I lost track of time.
我发现自己玩得太开心,都忘了时间了。
假定你是李华,请根据以下内容描述上周一你的16岁生日聚会的情景:
1.这是你上高中过的第一个生日,你很期待,一早给爸妈留纸条让他们下班早点回来;
2.你想让爸妈带你去你最喜欢的餐厅吃披萨;
3.你们吃得很开心,爸妈还为你准备了蛋糕;
4.你这一天的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Last Monday I had a great 16-year-old birthday party with my parents. I was very excited as this was my first birthday party as a high school student. I wasn't a kid any more. I was a young man from now on.
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