专题10 写作 -2021-2022年新高考英语模拟题分项汇编（第5期）

专题10 写作 一、（福建省龙岩市第二中学2021-2022学年高三期中）2020年春节期间，新型冠状病毒肺炎(NCP)在我国蔓延。在此期间，医务人员义无反顾冲上疫情防控第一线，作出了防疫的重大贡献。现在你向中国日报社写一封信，感谢在疫情期间奋斗在抗疫一线的医务人员。 要点： ① 感谢他们的勇敢，忘我和付出; ② 我们一定能战胜疫情； ③ 学习他们，学好本领，奉献社会； ④ 表达感谢，并祝他们安康。 要求： 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 2)词数 80 左右。 Dear Editors, I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for the unselfish efforts and mission of the forefront medical workers in fighting against the NCP. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, A middle school student 【答案】During a time of such uncertainty and crisis, it was humbling to see them courageously putting others first in moments of need, devoting their efforts and time selflessly. The medical workers in our country have inspiringly shown that together as a community, anything is possible. We have the confidence to win total victory in NCP fight. We applaud the efforts of the medical workers. Not only do we back for them, but also what we have learned from them is that studying hard and becoming heroes in the hearts of the people. We again want to express our thanks to your outstanding contributions to the NCP control efforts in the face of the ongoing epidemic. Take care and come back home safe and sound. 【分析】 这是一篇提纲类写作。 【解析】第1步：根据提示可知，2020年春节期间，新型冠状病毒肺炎(NCP)在我国蔓延。在此期间，医务人员义无反顾冲上疫情防控第一线，作出了防疫的重大贡献。现在你向中国日报社写一封信，感谢在疫情期间奋斗在抗疫一线的医务人员。要点：① 感谢他们的勇敢，忘我和付出；② 我们一定能战胜疫情；③ 学习他们，学好本领，奉献社会；④ 表达感谢，并祝他们安康。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：humbling； devote one’s efforts ；have the confidence to ；not only … but also …； in the face of 等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】 范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Not only do we back for them, but also what we have learned from them is that studying hard and becoming heroes in the hearts of the people.运用了倒装结构和名词性从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 二、（福建