专题8. 书面表达 -2021-2022学年七年级英语上册期末复习专项训练（上海专用）

书面表达 一 2019-2020上海市浦东新区三林北校 Write at least60 words about“ How to stay healthy”.(以“怎样保持健康”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 【答案】 How to stay healthy It's important to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing. I think there are several ways to stay healthy. First, good healthy eating habit is very important. we should eat three healthy meals every day instead of junk food. We'd better eat slowly. Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on. Last but not least, it's very important to laugh every day. 【解析】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以How to stay healthy为题，介绍生活中如何保持健康。“健康”这一话题非常贴近学生们的日常生活，教材中接触过的与此有关的词汇、短语和句型也比较多，学生们对此比较熟悉，因此写起来非常得心应手。审题可知，短文应分为两部分：首先引导健康话题，点明健康的重要性；接下来具体介绍生活中应如果保持健康，这是文章的主体部分。短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称来叙述。 2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、条理。短文开门见山，先点明了健康的重要性，然后引入主题“如何保持健康”；接下来进行了具体的介绍，用First, Second, Last but not least分成了三个部分，使表达很有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。以简单句结构为主，穿插了并列句、宾语从句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：stay healthy；eating habit；instead of；such as；stay up；in time；at least；and so on；Last but not least。 句型：It's important to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing.；I think there are several ways to stay healthy.；Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on.。 二 2019-2020上海市浦东新区第四教育署 Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic“How to be a healthy kid”.（以“怎样成为身体健康的孩子”为题写一篇不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格）： （注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,，否则不予评分。） Use the following points as a reference. （以下提示仅供参考） * Is it important to be healthy? Why? * What exercise do you do to keep yourself healthy? * What do you eat to keep yourself healthy? 【答案】 How to be a healthy kid Health is very important to us. Everyone wants t