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Section Ⅴ Writing——Giving instructions for making an unusual picture
[文体感知]
本单元的写作话题是“Giving instruction for making an unusual picture”,介绍如何制作一幅不同寻常的图画,属于说明文体裁。
介绍类说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言解释说明事物、阐明事理,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
在高考中,其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。
此类文章的语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
[增分佳句]
1.Art is the treasure house of virtue.
艺术乃德行的宝库。
2.The success of the art is no traces of artificial carve.
艺术的成功在于没有人工雕琢的痕迹。
3.Some classic works not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
一些经典作品不但让我们喜悦和兴奋,而且鼓励我们批判性地思考。
4.Without science and art, there is no human life.
没有科学和艺术,就没有人类的生活。
5.We all must inherit excellent literary and artistic heritage.
我们必须继承一切优秀的文学艺术遗产。
6.The exhibition gives local artists an opportunity to display their works.
这次展览为当地艺术家提供了展示自己作品的机会。
7.The mysteries of life exist in art;art is the shadow of life.
生活的奥秘存在于艺术,艺术也存在生活的影子。
8.Rules and modesty destroy genius and art.
规则与谦逊会毁掉天才和艺术。
[典题示例]
请你用家里的日常食品,介绍如何制作“披萨脸”。词数:80左右。
A pizza face
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 词汇推敲
1.a variety of
各种各样的……
2.seaweed
海藻,海草
3.be used as
被用来做……
4.cut up
切碎
5.think about
考虑
6.take a photo of
给……拍一张照片
第三步 遣词造句
1.在你的家里有各种各样的食物。
There are a variety of different foods in your home.
2.这些食物可以帮你制作一个披萨脸。
These foods can help you make a pizza face.
3.这里有一个好主意。
Here is a good idea.
4.当你完成这个笑脸的时候,你可以给它照一张像片。
When you finish making the face,you can take a photo of it.
5.你可以永久保存这张不同寻常的照片。
You can keep your unusual picture forever.
第四步 句式升级
1.用定语从句改写句1和句2
There are a variety of different foods in your home that can help you make a pizza face.
2.用so that改写句4和句5
When you finish making the face,you can take a photo of it,so that you can keep your unusual picture forever.
第五步 妙笔成篇
【参考范文】
A pizza face
There are a variety of different foods in your home that can help you make a pizza face.Here is a good idea.
Find small slices of carrot or pieces of seaweed which will be used as hair, and arrange in the style that you