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Section Ⅴ Writing——Introducing your favourite food
[文体感知]
本单元的写作话题是“Introducing your favourite food”,属于说明文,主要是对某一喜欢的食物进行描述、说明。介绍类说明文常使用生动的语言对某一事物进行具体逼真的描绘。一般说来,开头部分概述所描述的对象,主体部分具体描绘,结尾部分总结或发表看法。
[增分佳句]
1.With the improvement of the living standards, more and more people, especially children, are suffering from obesity.
随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的人,尤其是孩子,正在饱受肥胖之苦。
2.We must admit the fact that eating junk food is harmful to our health.
我们必须承认吃垃圾食品有害健康。
3.The majority of people take in too much fat and not enough fibre, which does great harm to their health.
大多数人摄入的脂肪太多,而纤维不足,这对他们的健康很有害。
4.A balanced diet and regular exercise can help us keep healthy both physically and mentally.
均衡的饮食和有规律的锻炼能帮助我们保持身心健康。
5.Green food is safe and healthy for you and your family.
对于你和你的家人来说,绿色食品是安全、健康的。
6.Eating green food is an important step on the road to staying fit and healthy.
吃绿色食品是保持健康之路的重要一步。
7.A healthy diet consists of eating a variety of foods rich in vitamins, fibre and mineral, and low in fat and calories.
健康饮食包括饮食多样化,吃富含维生素、纤维和矿物质而脂肪和卡路里含量低的食物。
8.In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.
在我看来,我们应当努力养成健康的饮食习惯来增强我们的体质。
[典题示例]
以“My favorite food”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你喜欢的食物。词数80左右。
My favorite food
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 词汇推敲
1.delicious
美味的,可口的
2.nutritious
有营养的,营养丰富的
3.a variety of/varieties of
各种各样的
4.shape
形状,外形
5.in many different ways
用很多不同的方式
第三步 遣词造句
1.我喜欢蘑菇。
I like mushrooms.
2.我认为它们好吃有营养。
I think they are very delicious and nutritious.
3.有些像是大圆头、胖墩墩的小房子。
Some are like small houses with big round heads and thick bodies.
4.有些有伞一样的形状。
Some have the shapes of umbrellas.
5.我妈妈能够用很多不同的方式做蘑菇。
My mother can cook mushrooms in many different ways.
6.蘑菇对人的健康很有好处。
Mushrooms are very good for people's health.
第四步 句式升级
1.用原因状语从句合并句1与句2
I like mushrooms because I think they are very delicious and nutritious.
2.用并列连词合并句3与句4
Some are like small houses with big round heads and thick bodies while some have the shapes of umbrellas.
第五步 妙笔成篇
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