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2022届高考英语作文专项突破一轮复习讲义
(全国通用)
[12] 尽可能让句子灵活、多样!
一篇有效地作文需要对句式不断变化。如果通篇只采用一个句式或几个句式,那么这篇文章是很单调乏味的。通常来讲,主要有四个基本的思路来让句式灵活起来:
1 添加一个并列句
2 添加一个从句
3 以独特的单词或词组开头
4 并列形容词或动词
添加一个并列句
前文已经讲过并列句,简单来说就是两个句子通过并列连词连接在一起,每个句子单独拿出来都可以,谁也不依赖于谁。
· 第一组句子:
The whether was cold and windy.
Al brought a thick blanket to the football game.
改后:The weather was cold and windy, so Al brought a thick blanket to the football game.
· 第二组句子:
I tried to sleep.
The thought of tomorrow’s math exam kept me awake.
改后:I tried to sleep, but the thought of tomorrow’s math exam kept me awake.
· 第三组句子:
My son can’t eat peanut butter snacks or sandwiches.
He is allergic to peanuts.
改后:My son can’t eat peanut butter snacks or sandwiches, for he is allergic to peanuts.
· 第四组句子:
This diner has its own bakery.
It has take-out service as well.
改后:This diner has its own bakery and it has take-out service as well.
· 第五组句子:
The cardboard storage boxes were soggy.
Rainwater had seeped into the basement during the storm.
改后:Rainwater