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05并列句和状语从句 2022英语备考纠错笔记
一.纠错一 并列连词的缺失或误用
(1)【误】We bought her a birthday present, she liked it very much.
【正】We bought her a birthday present, and she liked it very much.
[分析] 分析句式可知,两个分句之间缺少连词,结合句意“我们给她买了生日礼物,而且她很喜欢”可知,前后分句之间是并列关系,故在she前加and。
(2)【误】Everyone in the town knew him, we had no trouble finding his house.
【正】Everyone in the town knew him, so we had no trouble finding his house.
[分析] 分析句式可知,两个分句之间缺少连词,结合句意“镇上谁都认识他,因此我们毫不费力就找到了他的家”可知,前后分句之间是因果关系,故在we前加so。
(3)【误】Come a little earlier next time, and you'll miss the best part of the TV play.
【正】Come a little earlier next time, or/otherwise you'll miss the best part of the TV play.
[分析] 此句是“祈使句+or/otherwise+陈述句”句型。
[注意] 导致以上错误的原因主要在于两方面:①用逗号连接两个简单句;②不清楚句意或句式区别造成连词误用。首先,逗号前后不能为两句话,要么其中一个是从句,要么有连词连接。另外,还应注意避免机械地排列简单句,这也是书面表达中不能取得高分的原因之一,如:
I believe I am fit for it. I'm writing to apply for the position.
如果我们把这两个意义相关的句子用适当的连词连接起来,可得到下面的句子:
I believe I am fit for it, so I'm writing to apply for the position.
比较一下,可以看出,并列连词的使用可增强句子之间