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Period Ⅴ Writing
授课提示:对应学生用书第60页
不同寻常图片制作说明
[文体分析]
本单元的写作任务是不同寻常图片制作说明。不同寻常图片制作说明主要是描述制作某件物品的过程。其特点如下:
一、说明的类型
说明是告诉读者如何做或使用某物的书面信息。这种类型的写作应该包含足够的细节,这样读者才能轻松地读懂。
二、说明的结构
当你在一步步地描述一幅不同寻常的图片时,你可以遵循下面的结构:
首先,简单介绍一下将会创作出什么样的不同寻常的作品。
其次,列出制作图片所需要的东西。你可以使用“你需要什么”“你需要的东西”或“材料和工具”这样的标题。
最后,在“做什么”“程序”或“指示”的标题下给出有条理的指示。在按顺序列出步骤时,可以使用数字。一定要包括要点和重要警告。
[常用表达]
1.Please refer to the following steps:
2.Things you need
3.Procedures:Step 1:...Step 2:...Step 3:...
4.Display your...picture for your family and friends to see!
[写作要求]
假如你是李华,你班准备组织一场相互画肖像活动,请你给同学介绍下如何画肖像画。
[审题谋篇]
体裁
说明文(如何画肖像画)
时态
一般现在时为主
人称
第一人称
框架
①题目;
②交代写作目的,引出画肖像画;
③介绍画肖像画所需材料;
④介绍画肖像画步骤;
⑤展示你画的肖像画。
[词句推敲]
1.词汇
①根据,按照;取决于;据……所说according to
②被分成be divided into
③做一个真实而生动的描绘make a real and vivid description
④反映了艺术家自己的思想和感情reflect the artist's own thoughts and feelings
⑤画一幅美丽的人像paint a beautiful portrait of a person
2.句式
(1)完成句子
①肖像画按其不同的创作要求和表现手法可分为头部、半身、全身。
According to its different creative requirements and techniques of expression, portrait painting can be divided into head, halfbody, fullbody.
②画一幅美丽的人像很容易。
Painting a beautiful portrait of a person is very easy.
③尝试其他的想法,然后继续创造吧。
Try other ideas and go ahead and create.
(2)句式升级
④把句②改为用it作形式主语的句式。
It's very easy to paint a beautiful portrait of a person.
[妙笔成篇]
[参考范文]
How to draw a portrait painting?
According to its different creative requirements and techniques of expression, portrait painting can be divided into head, halfbody, fullbody.It requires the painter to make a real and vivid description of the character's appearance, shape, dress and background so as to express its spiritual characteristics, status, nationality and reflect the artist's own thoughts and feelings.It's very easy to paint a beautiful portrait of a person, but try other ideas, so go ahead and create.
Things you need
•a pencil
•brush paper
•volume, penknife
Procedures:
Step 1: Draw a woman on white paper.
Step 2: Paint in the color.
Step 3: Roll out the shavings with a pencil