专题01 满分作文（教师版）2021-2022中考冲刺满分作文（上海专用）

第一讲：满分作文之 Topic：写作步骤 【知识点梳理】 【满分作文】赏析 很多学生很好奇，究竟怎么样的文章算好，怎么样的文章算不好，我们经常在揣测着中考老师评分的口味到底是怎么样，今天你们有“口福”了，让我们身临其境，走近中考评分的标志，体味一下中考老师对于学生们的taste到底是怎么样的！ 上海市英语中考作文样本 To be a students with good manners (满分18) A类样本满分作文欣赏: 1 教师评分:7+8+3 I think I am a student with good manners. When my classmates help me, I usually say 'thanks' to them, and I often help my friends who are in trouble. I always help my teacher, too. ①To be a student with good manners, we shouldn't walk across the road when the traffic light is red. We ought to throw rubbish into the bin. ②We must help the people who need our help. ③That's what a student with good manners should do. 教师点评: 这是中考的一篇满分作文,文章行文连冠通顺,本文的亮点在于用不同的情态动词来增加文章的多面性,很好的避免了重复性,文章还适当的加入了高中的①不定式作状语②定语从句③表语从句,整编文章真实而简单,表达清楚而地道,是一篇难得的佳作! 2 教师评分：7+8+3 As we all know, good manners play an important part in daily life. I am a student with good manners because I always greet my teachers when I meet them. As a famous saying goes 'Attitude decides everything'. W