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强化训练06 新高考概要写作 学易同步精品课堂 Bike-sharing 共享单车 Step 1：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。 the advantages and the problems of China's bike-sharing Step 2：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。 Step 3：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述或合成句子。 Step 4：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。 Step 5：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。 China's bike-sharing has exploded from nothing about a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities. Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat, one can unlock a shared bicycle. Once the service has finished, the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account. The process lasts less than 30 seconds and costs no more than one penny. By the way, there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike, although areas such as university campus, and metro or bus station are preferred. 1. 因为方便与费用便宜，共享单车在中国一些大城市很受欢迎。 Major cities in China have witnessed the enormous popularity of bike-sharing due to its convenience and costs. Many young people believe shared bicycles have many advantages. They are not expensive to rent, they do not have to be protected from thieves, and there is no need to repair them. You just have to change them for another one. They are also environment friendly and lower the use of cars, which also helps to relieve traffic. In fact, it is considered an awesome combination of technology and tradition. 2. 年轻人认为共享单车在环保以及交通等方面给我们带来了很多好处。 Young people feel that shared bicycles bring lots of benefits in some aspects, including environmental protection and traffic. Since they appeared, shared bicycles have raised a lot of dust There is no doubt of the benefits but the disadvantages cannot be ignored. Many problems related to shared bicycles have emerged. It is due to bad behavior from some users who always want to seize the bicycles, but also because of the mess that has been created since one can leave the bicycle anywhere, which is against public urban order management. There are so many poorly pa