内容正文:
必背18书面表达必背范文投诉信
Writing 1
假如你是李华,你在某国外购物网站上购买了一个电子阅读器(e-reader),货到后你发现该产品存在问题。请你给该网店店主写一封投诉信,内容包括:
1. 产品的屏幕破损,开机后黑屏;
2. 个人提出的解决办法;
3. 希望尽快解决问题。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】
本篇投诉信可分为三个段落:第一段简要地介绍自己,说明已收到订购的电子阅读器(e-reader),但产品存在问题;第二段侧重说明该产品的具体问题并表达个人诉求;最后一段希望对方认真对待此事并尽快给予回复。在投诉时要把存在的问题说清楚,本文需要表明的两个问题即是the screen was broken和the screen went black。提出解决方法时,可要求对方更换新产品(replace a new one)或全额退款(give a full refund)。
【范文赏析】
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a regular customer of your online shop. I’m happy that the e-reader I ordered has arrived on time. However, it’s a great pity that I found some faults in the product.
First of all, when it arrived, its screen was broken. What’s worse, when I switched it on, the screen went black. The e-reader can’t be used at all and the problem has affected my normal life. I do hope you can replace a new one or give my full refund.
I hope you will consider this matter seriously. Your kind reply to this letter at your earliest convenience would b