35分写作规范练（一）-2020高考英语【试吧大考卷】二轮复习专项分层特训卷

35分写作规范练(一) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 [2019·青岛质检]Yesterday, I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains. He had five key chains and asked for me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this build a house？” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his hungry tonight.” I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave her a smiley key chain back as a gift, but his smile was awesome. I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be successfully if you win a smile from someone. 答案与解析： Yesterday, I was o( poor child who was selling some key chains. He had five key chains and asked my dog in the evening when I saw ,\s\do10(③)) me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this if you win a smile from someone. great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be his smile was awesome. I a smiley key chain back as a gift, and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave tonight.” I bought all the key build a house？” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his ①walked改为walking 　此处表示当作者昨天晚上正在遛狗的时候。表示过去正在进行的动作，应用过去进行时，故将walked改为walking。 ②the改为a　此处表示作者看见一个卖钥匙链的可怜的孩子。这里是第一次提到这个小孩，故非特指，不需要用the，且poor的发音以辅音音素开头，故将the改为a。 ③删除for　ask sb. to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“要求某人做某事”，故删除for。 ④在build前加to　此处表示“小男孩卖钥匙链是为了建房子吗？”这里应用不定式表示目的，故在build前加to。 ⑤hungry改为hunger　形容词性物主代词后面应接名词，故将hungry改为hunger。 ⑥chain改为chains　根据上文中的key chains和前面的all可知，此处应用chain的复数形式，故将chain改为chains。⑦her改为him　根据上文中的he可知，这个可怜的孩子是男生，故将her改为him。⑧but改为and　根据语境可知，前后部分是并列关系，而不是转折关系，故将but改为and。 ⑨feel改为felt　根据时间状语at that moment可知，此处应用一般过去时，故将feel改为felt。 ⑩successfully改为successful　be动词后面接形容词作表语，故将successfully改为successful。 第二节　书面表达(满分25分) [2019·洛阳、许昌市检测]假定你是李华，外国交换生Tony想参加你校的社团以学习