中考英语复习专题 写作指导课(共17张PPT)

中考英语复习专题 写作指导课 How to beautify the composition? Compare two compositions. Which do you think is better? My Day off I had a bad day off. I studied for a math exam. I stayed up. So I slept late. I got up and went to school. But it was Sunday. That was too bad. My Day off How was my day off? It was terrible. I studied very hard for my math exam last week, so I slept late. Can you believe it? When I woke up, it was already 9 o’clock. I got up quickly and hurried to school without breakfast. But when I got to school, I found nobody was there. Suddenly I realized it was Sunday! You can’t imagine how embarrassed I was! Structure of a good composition 1.Beginning (点题 尽量做到引人入胜） 2.Body（详写 行文连贯 语言丰富） 3.Ending（扣题 要升华 有亮点） 一档文标准 12-15分 包含所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富；应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚；没有或几乎没有语言错误，具备较强的语言运用能力，达到了预期的写作目的。 请同学们结合当时的情境细细体会下面两个句子哪个更好，并说出理由。 1.They listened to the music on the beach. They enjoyed the music on the beach. 2.A: I had a school trip, it